Mẫu đoạn văn hỗ trợ thi đại học môn tiếng anh THPT Quốc Gia có viết luận 2016
Chào các bạn, năm 2015 theo mẫu đề minh họa của BGD là các em 12 phải thi viết và phần
viết đoạn paragraph chiếm 1,5 điểm. Các bạn hãy phân tích kĩ hơn về đề minh họa của BDG
và sẽ thấy chỉ là viết 1 đoạn văn (paragraph) chứ không phải viết cả bài văn (essay). Là viết
paragraph chứ không phải viết essay theo như 1 số trường THPT và 1 số tài liệu gần đây đã
hướng dẫn. Độ dài 1 paragraph khoảng 150 từ. Và lưu ý khi viết paragraph các chúng ta
không được xuống dòng, không được tách làm 3 phần như viết essay, vì paragraph là “đoạn
văn” mà. Vẫn có 1 câu dẫn đề, 3-4 câu thân bài, 1 câu kết. Bố cục phải mạch lạc, sử dụng
đúng từ nối. Dưới đây là 1 số từ nối và 1 số đoạn văn mẫu, là đoạn văn (paragraph) chứ
không phải bài văn (essay) các bạn nhé.
1) cho ví dụ
-For example,
-For instance,
such as
2) nêu ý kiến
-In my opinion,
(đã in my opinion thì ko dùng I think nữa)
- Personally,
-From my point of view,
- From my perspective,
It seems to me that
3) đưa ý kiến đối lập
-However,
=Nevertheless = Nonetheless
-Although
4) Thêm vào ý
-Moreover,
-Furthermore,
- Additionally
= In additional,
- Besides,

we should tell our friends, relatives or families not to purchase products made from
body parts of endangered species. We should avoid supporting the market in illegal
wildlife including: tortoise shell, ivory, coral, ect. Finally, we should protect
wildlife habitat because the greatest threat that faces many species is the
widespread destruction of habitat. All in all, endangered species should be
protected so that the Earth will be a happy planet for us to live on.
2 In about 140 words, write a paragraph about the person who
has great influence on your life.
The person who has great influence on my life is my mother. She is 42 years
old. She is not beautiful but she is a wonderful woman after all. My mother
has an oval face with big black eyes and full lips. She has long black hair, a
slim build and a fair complexion but the thing I admire most is her character.
She is always kind to all of us. She never gets angry with anyone. She is a
simple person so she does not like wearing expensive clothes or jewels.
Also, she is a busy woman. She works from the early morning till the
evening in the market to sell clothes. Furthermore, she has to get up early
everyday to prepare breakfast for the family. I love my mother very much. I
will try to study hard to please her. I wish she would live with me forever.
3 In about 140 words, write about the changes that information
technology brings to your life.
Over the last two decades, information technology has been responsible for
creating amazing resources which put all the information we need right at our
fingertips and has dramatically changed our day-to-day lives. The first change
is that information technology has killed the greeting cards because we are now
using an e-card or email to greet others. The next change I want to mention is
that teenagers now tend to use the internet to prepare an online dating with
strangers they have never met yet. The way of sharing information is also
changed. Social network like internet or Smartphone now allow us to share
information anytime and anywhere. Then information technology also change
the way we relax. These days, people often spend their free time watching TV,

lead to obesity, backache, and short-sightedness. Besides, people paying too much
attention to online activities may become passive in real life because of their lacks
of communication. In short, everything has its two sides, so does computer.
Therefore, it is necessary that we use it for right purposes.
6 Why do people learn English? Write a paragraph about 150
words
English is an international language which plays an important part in many field of
our society and all of us have to learn English for some reasons. The first reason is
that English is one of the major subjects which are taught at schools and
universities. If you want to get high grades and pass the exams, there is no way but
learning English. The second and the main reason is to get a high – paying job. We
all know that English is required in many jobs concerning languages. As it is an
international language native and second language so it is easy for you to
communicate with foreigners if you know English. In brief, people learn English
because it is a useful tool in many important fields and one of the main keys to
succeed in modern society.
7 In about 140 words, write a paragraph about the benefits of
exercise.
Health is considered to be the most valuable thing we have and the most
effective way to better one’s health is doing regular exercise. One advantage of
doing exercise is to reduce stress. People who exercise are likely to feel more
relaxed and healthier. Doing regular exercise helps the body produce happy
chemicals that make the exercisers reduce the worries. Another benefit
exercising brings us is that we will feel more energetic to overcome our daily
difficulties. Doing exercise also helps us reduce the possibilities of being ill,
protects us from some fatal diseases as heart disease, cancers and diabetes.
Controlling our weight is another value. Fats are burnt during our practicing
exercise, which helps us to keep fit. To sum up, doing exercise enables people
to have good body-buildings, keep fit and brings exercisers many benefits to
have a longer, healthier and happier life.

making a lot of money
"Many people think that a successful career is a job making a lot of money but I
strongly disagree with this idea. First of all, In know some people who are very
successful in their careers don't have a lot of money but they know what they are
good at and get to show their talents in what they do. Besides, people having
successful careers will show their passion when working. It means that they have
motivation to work every day. What's more, a successful career also has its own
true value which is very important to everyone. For instance, a volunteer to finance
a charity campaign is considered to have a successful career although he doesn't
get a high salary. To conclude, a successful career is not necessarily defined as a
high-paying job but it depends on the way we think about it.
11) Write about the following topic:
Some universities require students to take the entrance examination with the
English subject. Other universities do not. Which is better? Use specific reasons
and examples to support your answer.
In my opinion, it is better if universities in VN require students to take the entrance
examination with the English subject because E is an international language which
is very useful in many fields. First of all, university students are the ones who have
many good opportunities to get good jobs which often enquire E knowledge. E is
the main language used in business, international contracts, and so on. Therefore,
knowing E is the key to success of many students in the future. What's more, there
are over 700 million people speak E as their native or second language so students
have to know E to communicate with foreigners to overcome all communication
barrier and get success. Additionally, knowing E gives students chances to get
access to knowledge like the Internet because the incredible amount of information
on the Internet is in E. And searching Internet is a major skill for students to enrich
their knowledge. To summarize, it is necessary for universities to require E as a
major subject in the entrance examination due to the reasons i have mentioned
12) Write a paragraph to discuss about the idea “Should Facebook
be banned?”

using public transportation
As we see, The public transportation brings us a number of benefits in term of
individual as well as society. First of all, That many people travel by public
vehicles helps reduce the environment pollution. That's because the amount of fuel
( which turns into exhaust after that) used to carry the number of people in a bus is
less than that of many individual vehicles . Moreover, Traffic jam will no longer be
our long- lasting obsession if most everybody chooses public vehicles as daily
means of transportation. Congestion only turns up when so many people's own
cars, motorbikes spread out every corner of streets. Last but not least, We can save
money by using buses to travel or electric trains to commute .The tickets of public
transportation are often cheap because it serves the big number of customers. As
these above advantages of public transportation, I strongly suggest that we should
use public transportation as main means of transportation.
15) Do you agree with the idea that marriage should be based on
love or not and why? (write a paragraph about 140 words).
Nowadays, almost all of people experience love and then reach marriage.
However, I partly agree with the idea that marriage should be based on love
because only love is not enough. Here the following reasons are. First, there is no
denial that love makes people happy in life and helps them overcome severe
difficulties and build a warm family. It is love that joins a man and a woman
together. When these above supposed things become true, I call it true love, in
other words, forgiveness and sacrifice contribute to true love. Moreover, future
home’s finance also affects the family happiness. For example, your child can’t
study at school without money, you even have no wonderful moment when both of
wife and husband "s inconsistency related to money turns up and so on. In
conclusion, marriage should be built on love and serious attitude of two sides who
accept specific characters each other and fulfill the gap’s spouses.
16) In about 140 words, write a paragraph about your hobby
Of all the interesting free time activities as well as entertainments; I like reading
book most because it brings to me many good aspects. First and foremost, reading

to respect your roommates' privacy because everyone has rights to have their
secrets. So, you mustn’t read your mates’ messages or letters if you aren’t
permitted. In addition, you should take your duty and responsibility. In general,
you should help to cleaning, put litter bags to dust heap, put things back after you
used. Furthermore, you should try to share your ideas, experience of study and life,
your happiness etc. And you listen to your mates experience as well. All in all, as
long as you enjoy your dormitory life, get well with your friends, and then you
should be a good roommate. Whatever what you experiences, those of them will be
a beautiful memorial of your rest of life.
19) Write a paragraph to introduce a beauty spot in Viet Nam.
Coming to Vietnam, foreign visitors can’t forget the ancient town of Hoi An,
30 km south of Da Nang, lying on the banks of the Thu Bon River. Occupied by
early western traders, Hoi An was one of the major trading centers of Southeast
Asia in the 16th century. Hoi An has a distinct Chinese atmosphere with low, tile-
roofed houses and narrow streets; the original structure of some of these streets still
remains almost intact. All the houses were made of rare wood, decorated with
lacquered boards and panels engraved with Chinese characters. Pillars were also
carved with ornamental designs. There is no shortage of bacon in town, but cao lầu
is the dish that one simply cannot miss. Prices and service are rightfully on par
with the latest venues in major cities like Hanoi and Ho Chi Minh. People are very
friendly in Hoi An. Over the last few years, Hoi An has become a very popular
tourist destination in Vietnam.
20) Students should take a part- time job. Do you agree or
disagree with the statement? Write a paragraph to justify your
answer
Part time job is the best way to absorb knowledge, learn experience for one’s
career and earn his living. Therefore, I strongly agree with the idea that students
should take a part-time job. First of all, students taking a part-time job can get
more experience for their future jobs. For example, pedagogic students take part
time jobs as tutors can have chances to practice to be teachers in the future. In

care of their children, fulfill their social tasks and also get their career
achievements. It’s very unequal and quite hard for them to complete these tasks at
the sometime. Furthermore, women, especially in third world nations, have to
suffer from domestic violence, gender discrimination in work places. Women are
an integral part of our world, as it is said that “men build the house and women
make it home”. Therefore, let get started to protect them
23) Do you agree with the idea that married women shouldn’t go to
work?
Should women be housewives or career women? In my opinion, married working
women should be encouraged to leave their jobs to be full-time housewives. The
first benefit of being full-time mothers is that their children will be well taken care
of. Working mothers will find it hard to both work outside and look after their
children and families. Having chances to raise their children to masters is the
second main reason why married women shouldn’t go to work. When women
aren’t under a lot of working pressure, they will spend time staying with her
children to teach them the bad and the good. Their children will feel comfortable
and not lonely. The third reason of mine is that the risk of both parents dying and
leaving children orphaned is reduced. Today there are many accidents outside so I
think one of parents should stay at home to be safe if bad things happen. In
general, I strongly believe that men should go out to bring money and caring the
whole family is women’s responsibility.
24) Describe your ideal house.
I often dream of a modern and comfortable house by the sea. There will be a
garden in front of the house with a lot of beautiful flowers. To the right of the
garden, I will have a garage built to park my car. To the left of the garden, there
will be a fresh well for my family to get water. There will be twelve rooms in my
house: five bedrooms, two living rooms, one study, two bathrooms, one dining
room and one kitchen. The front windows will look to the sea and the back
windows will look to the mountains. In the living room, there will be a fireplace to
keep warm in the winter. In my study, there will be a computer for me to surf the

25. S + prefer = S + would rather + V
26. S + V + O = S + find + it (unreal objective) + adj + to + V
27. It’s one’s duty to do sth = S + be + supposed to do sth
28. S + be + PII + to + V = S + be + supposed to do sth
29. Imperative verb (mệnh lệnh) = S + should (not) + be + PII
30. Imperative verb (mệnh lệnh) = S + should (not) + do sth