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TWE Templates
Agree/Disagree
Some people argue as if it is a general truth that a But to be frank, I cannot agree with them.
There are numerous reasons why I hold no confidence on them, and I would explore only a few
primary ones here.
The main problem with this argument is that it is ignorant o the basic fact that Explain
Another reason why I disagree with the above statement is that I believe that
What is more, some students are interested in
In a word,
Agree/Disagree
Some people prefer to A, others believe B, Nowadays some may hold the opinion that , but
others have a negative attitude. As far as I am concerned, I agree/disagree that MY arguments
for this point are listed as follows.
One of the primary causes is that
Examples
But there is a further more subtle point we must consider. Examples.
What is more Examples
General speaking, Recognizing the fact that should drive us to conclude that
Agree/Disagree
Nowadays, some may hold the opinion that But others have a negative attitude. As far as I am
concerned, I agree that My arguments for this point are listed as follows.
I agree with the statement that without reservation since
Another reason why I agree with the above statement is that I believe that
In a word, Taking into account of all these factors, we may reach the conclusion that
Choice/Preferences
When it comes to , although some people think that , they fail to see I am , and probably will
always be ,one of those who argue that
The most persuasive point is that
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The main reason why I agree with the above statement, however, is that Take as example,
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There is another factor that deserves some words here. Such as
Similarly, these reasons are also usable when we consider that (examples: )
From the above you might got idea that I agree (repeat the above three reason ). So, it is
sagacious to support the statement that it is better to
Choice/Preferences
In my point of view, A is as important as, if not more important than B. So it is sagacious to
choose A. Among count less factors which influence A. there are three conspicuous aspects as
follows.
The above point is certainly true if A is considered. For example
Another reason why I agree with the above statement is that I believe that A is better than B. For
instance
It would probably not be too kindly disposed to the idea that B is not important. B
This is arbitrary to judge B according only to the excuse I mentioned in the above paragraph.
Similarly, these reasons are also usable when we consider that
Admittedly, A By he same token, however, B Taking into account of all these factors, we
may reach the conclusion that
Choice/Preferences
When it comes to , Nevertheless, in my part, I prefer A rather than B as my inclination. My
arguments for this point are listed as follows.
I agree with the statement that without reservation since
Naturally It can be given a concrete example
A more essential factor why I advocate the argument of is that. Obviously Take the case of a
thing that
Furthermore, what is worth noticing fact is that This demonstrates the undeniable fact that
Of course, choosing B also has advantages to some extent, But if all these factors are
contemplated, the advantages of A carry more weight than those of B. From what has been
discussed above, we may finally draw the conclusion that

Therefore we have no complete evidence to suggest that BBB is always better than AAA. What is
more, if you notice the invisible benefits of CHOOSING AAA, you can understand AAA more
deeply.
Here I would explain a few of the most important reasons. The main reason is that To illustrate
this, there is an example that is very persuasive:
is only part of the important aspects, and another equally significant role of CHOOSING AAA
lies in the development of
This demonstrates the undeniable fact that
Besides, the further reason why I advocate AAA is that This may explain why
In addition
Finally
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If all the factors above are considered, we will find out that the advantages of AAA outweigh
those of BBB. Therefore from what we have discussed, we may safely come to the conclusion
that CHOOSING AAA is a rather wise decision. But I have not denied the opinion that
CHOOSING BBB. I must admit that people can DO WELL without AAA, but no one can ignore
the added convenience and satisfaction offered by AAA. Such experience will definitely be
helpful in one's later life.
Choice/Preferences
It seems, in so many items, very difficult for us to prefer one to another because all of them have
their advantages and disadvantages to the extent that it is hard to distinguish.
Yet that does not mean they are all the same to me. Which one I prefer depends on my own
experience, life style and emotional concerns. To be frank, I prefer AAA most in my point of
view.
Choice/Preferences
To choose A or choose B is something of a dilemma to the public because they sometimes are
confused by the seemingly good qualities of B, and neglect the genuinely good aspects of A.
[For B, people are often driven to believe that / It is quite easy for average people to CHOOSE B
because of the obvious reason that] (As a proverb says, "Everything has two sides".)

propensity for A is that 2 .The third reason, not the last/however, goes this way: 3 .
In conclusion, to mention there are more.
Choice/Preferences
While both the two [methods/choice] may have their advantages and disadvantages, they can be
applied under different circumstances. Afterwards, I will explain my opinion about it.
[A has the obvious advantage that / One very strong argument for A is that] But there lies
intrinsic harmful characteristic in this method. Some [people/expert] [maintain/warn] that
Furthermore, Therefore we have no complete evidence to suggest that A is always better
than B.
On the other hand, choosing B also has advantages to some extent, For example, . However,
it is also important to see that under certain circumstances B will (disadvantage) Or: Yet there
are some people who cast serious doubts on B Or: Although B does have its seemingly profound
[advantages/ reason], at the mean time[there lies intrinsic [harmful characteristic/drawbacks] in it
such as / it can be achieved only conditionally cause ] .
But if all these factors are contemplated, [as far as I am concerned / according to my personality
and fondness], the advantages of A carry more weight than those of B because A fits [me/us
students] better in two ways: In the first place, , In the second place/secondly, Therefore
from what we have discussed, we may safely come to the conclusion that CHOOSING AAA is a
rather wise decision.
It seems, very difficult for us to prefer one to another because all of them have their advantages
and disadvantages to the extent that it is hard to distinguish. Yet that does not mean they are all
the same to me. Which one I prefer depends on my own experience, life style and emotional
concerns. [As far as I am concerned / According to my personality and fondness/ To be frank], I
would like to choose A, because there are too many benefits that outnumber its disadvantages not
to choose it. B, on the other hand, has advantages no more than its disadvantages.
Agree/Disagree
There is no denying the fact that (if one should /if is correct) is a hot topic which is much
talked about [not only by , but also by /by people across the world/ in a modern society]. Or:
There is no denying the fact that (if one should /if is correct) is a popular topic which has
caused heated debate over a long period of time (because it affects everybody in his or her daily

A study of will make this point clear
Certainly, B has its own advantages, such as
I do not deny that A has its own merits.
From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw
the conclusion that
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In summary, it is wiser
In short
It can be given by a (well known/concrete) example that / In order to see this point clearly,
let us to see an example:
This may explain why It goes without seeing that In fact, we can observe easily that in
modern society,
As a proverb says, "Everything has two sides".
As a proverb says, "Where there is a will there is a way".
As is known to all, "No pains, no gains."
Let's bring our discussion here to a more present and practical context. In today's world,
I can say that if you have no experience like these, your life is an inadequate one.
be of great benefit to sb./sth.
The reason of is not so much as
People differ greatly in their attitudes towards this problem. Some people hold the opinion that
Others, [ however/on the contrary], maintain that
It is necessary/convenient/desirable/advisable] for sb. to do sth. have [trouble/a difficult time] [in
doing sth./with sth.]
Nevertheless I must admit that people can do well without AAA, but no one can ignore the added
convenience and satisfaction offered by AAA. Such experience will definitely be helpful in one's
later life.
Topic: 1
People study in college or university for many different reasons. I think the most important reason
is to gain more knowledge and learn more skills. Of course, there are also many other reasons that

education gives me chances to change my life.
The third reason for attending a college is to increase knowledge. Study is a so interesting thing
that it make our life rich and colorful. It expands our eyesight by informing us with lots of new
things what we cannot gain from our common life or experience. On the other hand, by attending
college or university, you can learn the knowledge or skill necessary for your future work.
People attend college or university for various reasons. Some may attend for new experiences,
and others may think about other things. What I have mentioned is just very few of them.
(Essay ID: 404. This is a 5 point essay)
Topic: 1
Mr.Taoxingzhi, the most famous educator in China, once said: the biggest misfortune in one’s life
is that one does not receive a uniniversiy education. Needless to say, a university degree often
helps a person achieve his goal with more ease. However, do we attend university just in pursuit
of a degree? Does a university only provide us nothing benefieial besides a paper-made diploma?
As far as I am concerned, we enjoy a university education in the following aspects which
attribulates us to a university education:
Firstly, with the knowledge learned in a university,we will have a deep understanding with our
society. It is ture that genuine knowledge comes from practice, but it can not be denied that
genuine knowledge, tells us how to practise. A thorough study in a college or university, of course,
enables us to realize how the society works and how to cope with certain problems arising from it
in a more efficiently, more skillful way.
Second, an university education usually make it possible that we acquire a decent job. Because of
an accomplishment of a four-year study, it is not difficult for us to find a good job in most cases.
How can we imagine that a graduate majoring in astronomy has to be a vendor in the street!
Undoubtfully, he/she should sit in his/her labortory, making a reseach on aircraft on a
computor.Obviously, a university education assures him/her a decent job.
Last, but not the least, we can help others much better if puttiing what we learn in a university
into use. A university education corrects our values, enhance our skills, and broad our horizons.
With those, we are moe capable of giving a hand to those who are in need of help than before.
“Knowledge is power”.When achieving a degree in a university, we can get a better
understanding of the society, find a decent job in an easy way, and help others better. All of those

Topic: 1
Why do people need to attend colleges or universities? Different people have different answers to
this question. I believe that the three most common reasons are to prepare for a career, to have
new experiences, and to increase their knowledge of themselves and the world around them.
Career preparation is becoming more and more important to young people. For many, this is the
primary reason to go to college. They know that the job market is competitive. At college, they
can learn new skill for careers with a lot of opportunities. This means careers, such as information
technology, that are expected to need a large workforce in the coming years.
Also, students go to colleges and universities to have new experiences. This often means having
the opportunity to meet people different from those in their hometowns. For most students, going
to college is the first time they've been away from home by themselves. In addition, this is the first
time they've bad to make decisions on their own. Making these decisions increases their
knowledge of themselves.
Besides looking for self-knowledge, people also attend a university or college to expand their
knowledge in subjects they find interesting. For many, this will he their last chance for a long time
to learn about something that doesn't relate to their career.
I would recommend that people not be so focused on a career. They should go to college to have
new experiences and learn about themselves and the world they live in.
(Essay ID: 73 . Sample essay provided by Erin Billy of www.TestMagic.com)
Topic: 1
Now days, more and more people are trying to attend college or university. Different people do so
for different reasons. Some typical reasons are new experiences, career preparation and increased
knowledge. In my opinion, it is the fast developement, almost explosion, of our world that make
people to consider attending college or university.
People would usually get bored when they focus on one field for a long time. For this reason, they
go to college to pursue experiences in new areas. We often hear that an electrical engineer went
to a university to study art or music. With the new experiences, they expand their ken. Maybe
some good ideas would jump out during their daily work.
As for the young, they attend college for career preparation. Not only could they get knowledge
needed for their future work, they could learn how to think and how to solve questions. The

understand other people. It is a preparation for students to go to cooperate with other people in
the society.
All in all, students not only can learn lots of new knowledge from the books but also can learn
much more necessary experience such as how to arrange time and how to cooperate with other
people. It is ver important for their future work and life.
(Essay ID: 335 . Sample essay provided by Erin Billy of www.TestMagic.com)
Topic: 1
Today more and more people attend college or university. But why? As a student of a key
university, I want to give my opinion.
Of course, we attend university to increase knowledge. University provides some basic knowledge
for our research or our career in the following years. It provides basic information about the major
we chose, such as what it research in. If you find that you are not interested in that major, u can
change it, till u find one u are interested in. It also provides knowledge for all majors, such as
advanced mathematic, English, physics, basic chemistry. Teacher there can help you to decide
what you do in the future, to enter a graduate school or to take a job. We must do a lot of
experiment during the school years, that makes us quite capable. We visit a factory in the second
year to get a general idea about the work our major do. And we have a internship in the third year
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to do the real work.
Then, you can get new experience from university. You can join the student union or join a club.
You can learn a lot from it. First, you can learn how to communicate with the different people.
And u can learn how to organize a meeting or a party.
And also you can prepare for your career. There are lots of programs to let the students be trained
for a job. University runs the program by cooperating with some very large company, some
manager from the company will give us some courses which teach us how to run a company, how
to lead your group to finish the work, how to cope with some problem, and how to be more
confident. And they also tell us which kind of employee they want in the company. These things
are quite useful for us, especially for those who want to get a job after graduation.
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There are many people want to go to university or college every year and they decide to do so for
many different reasons. I believe there are three common reasons are to prepare for career,
increase their knowledge and get new experience.
Prepare for career is very important for young people nowadays. In a competitive society, if they
have not a good educational background, they will not get a good opportunity in their career or
even cannot find a job, so college and university can provide them new skills to meet the
requirements of career.
Also, students attend to university or college can increase their knowledge in subjects they
interested, for many people, this is maybe the primary reason to go to college. There are many
excellent professors and experts can give us a plenty of knowledge which including many areas.
For many people this maybe their last chance for a long time to get knowledge that don't relate to
their career.
Besides looking for knowledge, some people want to go to college or university because they
decide to live a new life. University can support young people an environment where they can
intercommunicate about many topics such as literature, goal of life, art and emotions which are
hard to talked about after their university lives, so it is a special experience for young people to
live and study in college or university.
All in a word, I prefer increase knowledge and get a special experience to prepare for career in
university because getting good opportunities in career is partly depend on your knowledge and
experiences on diverse areas.
(Essay ID: 260. This is a 5 point essay)
Topic: 2
Who teaches you to walk? Who teaches you to speak? It is your parents who teach you to do
these basic things in your life. So don't you think that parents are the best teachers!
Firstly, parents know us very much. Parents give us life, and I think that we will spend large
amount of time with them. So they know our merit and demerit in details. Meanwhile, they will
help us to get rid of our demerit.
Furthermore, parents possessed many experiences. Since they are older than us, they have
experienced many things. Sometimes, they are just like our models. And as the saying goes:

Topic: 2
Parents influence greatly their children for a lifetime. I think people are molded by two factors,
family and the society that they are in. From birth, humans are influenced by the surrounding
people for their characteristics. Parents take a big role in bringing up children, which affects their
lives for a long time.
In early infanthood, babies are looking to moms and dads to learn basic manners to be accepted in
society. Some of these manners include not running around in restaurants or hitting other kids. As
they grow up, they learn more from parents about social etiquette, which makes them more
suitable to live in society. Children tend to look to their parents for role models knowingly or
unknowingly.
Besides, parents can also affect children's study habits. Children of doctors , lawyers, investment
bankers, and other professionals see their mothers and fathers work a lot of time, reading books,
and punching keyboards, even at home. They are showing their children how to study by their
own behavior.
However, parents can also be a bad example for their kids. It is difficult for children who have
abusive parents to lead a normal childhood and is possible that they may become similar to their
abusive parents when they grow up. In this sense, the parents' negative role in shaping the
children's personality cannot be emphasized more.
In conclusion, parents are the best teachers for their children. They leave big marks on their
children's lives and are therefore more influential teachers than any others they may have in their
lives.
(Essay ID: 324 . Sample essay provided by Erin Billy of www.TestMagic.com)
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Topic: 2
Who are the best teachers in our life? In my opinion, the first teachers we have in our lives in
most cases are our parents. They teach us to walk, to speak, and to have good manners before we
reach "the real world. " More than even the professional teachers that we have in school, parents
are generally the most involved in the development and education of children.
The main reason for my view is that our parents are the best teachers at the beginning of our lives,

Man, through the ages, has undergone many changes, from a period when he hunted for his food
to the present era when man is dependent on preprocessed foods. During this period not only has
man changed his mode of eating but his whole lifestyle as well. In pursuit of more in this
competitive world, man no longer has time as he once had. He is caught in a race against the
clock. A person who finishes more in lesser time is considered more efficient. This pressure to do
more in less time has affected his eating habits as well and, as a result, man no longer has time to
cook food. Early man's only objective was to seek food to sustain him and his family. Nowadays
finding food has taken a back seat to other priorities, such as career and education.
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Food is no longer of that importance. This is not an encouraging trend. People are too dependent
on preprocessed or precooked food, which no longer has the freshness it once had. Such foods
loose their mineral and vitamin content and are not as healthy as fresh food. That is why the
number of diseases is also rising. People have also shifted to high calorie content food like French
fries, pizzas, and ice cream, etc., which is causing obesity, fatigue, etc. As man is becoming busy
and too involved in his busy schedule, he has no time even to take care of his own personal needs.
Furthermore, cooking is an art which is dying out. People once enjoyed cooking . It was a means
of eliminating stress and tension. People were once able to relax during this time and reflect on
their lives.
People may tend to argue that by using precooked and preprocessed food they are efficiently
using time and can use this precious time saved for other purposes. But is it really worth it? This is
a question whose answer can invite much speculation about whether by saving this little time we
are inviting lots of other problems, which could easily be avoided. It is actually making our lives
not simpler but more complicated. We have lost many of the simpler things in our lives, like the
simple acts of selecting our evening meal, preparing it, and enjoying it with our loved ones, and
we are worse off for it.
(Essay ID: 336 . Sample essay provided by Erin Billy of www.TestMagic.com)
Topic: 3
Nowadays, wherever we turn our gaze, we can see different types of food that are easier to
prepare. For instance, we can buy frozen foods in a supermarket and just prepare it in a couple of

neglected that modern cooking facilities play a dramatic role in this trend.
Some people regard this trend as a spoiler of our lives. Their argument focuses on two main
points. First, many newly emerged types of food have not the essence of a "complete meal" as
defined by nutritionists. To add to the problem, these food types are often served alone. In fact,
there are many medical reports warning people from depending upon such fast meals in their food.
Other reports indicate a high potential of malnutrition among those who are "addicted" to the
common duet of burgers and cola.
Second, the advantage of gathering family members around a meal at home is lost. Fast prepared
food types are usually eaten outside home. With the absence of regular family meetings,
relationships are likely to be weaker.
Others think that fast prepared food types do improve our style of life. This opinion comes
especially from busy people, working wives, and younger people. They believe that we have many
things in life more important than eating. Time spent on food preparation is considered wasted by
them. Wives will have more time to take care of their families' souls not just stomachs. Family
relationships will get stronger. Business men and women will have more time to concentrate on
their business without worrying about food arrangements. In general, people will have a greater
opportunity to take care of their minds and hearts. Reports estimate the time spent on food
arrangements as a large percentage of our lives.
I agree with that food preparation should take its necessary time and care. Otherwise, the time
saved in food preparation can lead to longer times of headache or even of staying in hospitals
suffering from malnutrition.
(Essay ID: 328 . Sample essay provided by Erin Billy of www.TestMagic.com)
Topic: 3
The twentieth century has brought with it many advances. With those advances, human lives have
changed dramatically. In some ways life is worse, but mostly it is better. Changes in food
preparation methods, for example, have improved our lives greatly.
The convenience of preparing food today is amazing. Even stoves have gotten too slow for us.
Microwave cooking is much easier. We can press a few buttons and a meal is completely cooked
in just a short time. People used to spend hours preparing an oven-cooked meal, and now they can
use that time for other, better things. Plus, there are all kinds of portable, prepackaged foods we

the same distance than for sound. Therefore, book knowledge can inform us some useful theories
that can give us general ideas and help us understand the real phenomenon better.
In turn, practice knowledge check out the theories gained from books. There is an old Chinese
saying that practice is the only criterion of inspecting the truth. So not all knowledge from books is
credible, even false. When Aristotle wrote in his transcripts that the earth is the center of our
planets, no one doubts this for centuries. However, when Galileo read about it, he did not suspect
it at first, but when he made some observation and research, he found it is not the truth. Then
comes the new theory—Sun center theory.
In our daily life, we can learn much information from practice. To learn swimming, it is useless to
be absorbed in reading skills written in books. Only when you learn it in a swimming pool, can you
make it. There are still a lot of things you must learn from your own experience, such as driving a
car, riding a bicycle, operating a machine. And the most important is that it is often easier learn
knowledge from practice than from books. As far as the average people are concerned, it is
natural to learn from experience. Primitive people learned skills hand by hand which is the way
they were handed down from one generation to another.
Modern people also learn things in practice. In workshops, leading workers teach apprentices
carefully; in activity clubs, teachers teach youngsters to be familiar with their hobbies. It is
obvious that all of things considered knowledge gained from practice is more close and direct than
from the books.
Therefore, two kinds of knowledge has importance. For research people , knowledge from books
is more important, while for our average people, knowledge from practice is more important. As
students, we must first learn knowledge from books well, and at the same time we must have the
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good sense to tell from what is right and what is wrong.
(Essay ID: 76 . Sample essay provided by Erin Billy of www.TestMagic.com)
Topic: 4
We gain our knowledge about the world and our life from two sources: from experience and from
books. These two resources are both important, but which of them is more important?
Knowledge from books forms a very important part of our knowledge structure. In schools and

factory. The noise of engines will also influent our temper, and may cause us susceptible to anger,
and easily lose temper.
Furthermore, a strong reason to oppose this idea is that building a factory will destroy the
landscape of this town. Most people living in this town make their living by cultivating and
harvesting crops. The factory is inappropriate with the landscape of the town and it will occupy
the land that is used to farming.
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Of course, building a factory also has advantages to some extent. For example, it will bring more
working opportunity for local people, and also it will help developing the local economics. But
comparing with the disadvantages, I strongly oppose the idea to build a factory near my
community.
(Essay ID: 79 . Sample essay provided by Erin Billy of www.TestMagic.com)
Topic: 5
I support the idea that a factory to be built near our community. I list my reasons as follows.
Firstly, a new factory near our community helps to improve living standard of people in our
community. The factory will employ a lot of workers. As a consequence, the unemployment rate
will drop significantly. Many people in our community will find a job in the factory. As people's
income increases, they will be able to spend more money on their food, clothing and leisure time,
and the quality of life will be increased.
Secondly, a new factory will bring prosperity to our community. The tax collected from a factory
is an important source of revenue for our town. As people have higher income, income tax
collected will also be increased. The town will be able to spend more money on infrastructures
and other development. Moreover, in order to accommodate more workers, more homes and
stores will be needed. This will boost real estate development in our community.
Some people say that a factory would bring smog and pollution, and destroy the quality of the air
and water in town. This is not the truth. Modern technologies have made today's factories
technology intensive and brought pollutions to the minimum. There are also worries that the social
structure of this community will be changed and the traditional life will be affected. We should
understand that society needs to evolve and we cannot always stay in the old time.

A company has announced that it wishes to build a large factory near our community. To be
frank, I have mixed emotions about this.
Obviously, there are some advantages having such a factory nearby. For example, it can provides
more job opportunities and many people may work in the factory. What is more, it also gives a
good chance for the development of other business in our community such as shops, theatres and
restaurants. Furthermore, the products the factory manufactures will improve our quality of living.
On the other hand, there are some disadvantages building a factory here. First, it will disturb the
quiescence of our community. Once the factory is set up, a lot of people will rush into our
community to work, and the road will get crowded. To transfer the raw materials the factory
needs, there will be many trucks coming and going through the streets, and the noise will disturb
residents and it is unsafe for our children who always play freely in the streets before.
Second, the factory will produce many waste products each day, and there will be much waste
water coming out from the factory and it will pollute our rivers. We do not want to have to see
hundreds and thousands tons of waste piled near our houses, and we do not want to see our
nearby rivers turning into black dishes either.
After weighing the advantages and disadvantages, I decide to oppose to set up such a factory near
our community because we need quiet surrounding, blue sky and clean rivers.
(Essay ID: 423. This is a 5 point essay)
Topic: 5
Weather it is beneficial to build a large factory near our community is a prevalent topic
undergoing serious debate. Two different opinions obviously exist to support and to oppose. After
pondering the opinions from several aspects, personally, I agree with the idea that it is beneficial
to build a large factory near our community.
By comparing the advantage and disadvantage they will get, people judge which role they should
hold. In my opinion, the advantage in this case is superior than the disadvantage. we can see it
below.
The main reason for my propensity for the choice is that the factory will supply lots of
employment opportunities for society, especially the people of the community nearby. The
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do business, learn and communicate. A change in internet service implies good way of living for
every one in my home town.
(Essay ID: 331 . Sample essay provided by Erin Billy of www.TestMagic.com)
Topic: 6
If I could change one important thing about my hometown, it would be air pollution problem, and
I will give the following reasons to explain why I want to solve the problem.
The first and most important reason is that I hope that my hometown can become a beautiful city.
As an old industrial city, my hometown has made a great deal of contribution for the country’s
economic development. At a result, the natural environment of the city has been badly damaged.
The forest has disappeared; the mountains have become bald, and the most awful thing is that the
air quality becomes more and more worse. People seldom see the blue sky during most time of
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year.
Another reason why I want to change my hometown’s air pollution situation is that the city’s
development needs clean and tidy environment to attract investors. Nowadays people have come
to know that the city’s environment, which is so called “software facility of the city”, plays an
important role in the city’s future. For example, due to the fact that the environment of the city is
very poor, many local students who pursue their study out of the city would rather find
themselves a job in other cities than coming back to their hometown after they graduated.
In addition, nowadays people have paid more and more attention to their health. If air pollution
problem cannot be solved as quickly as possible, people’s requirement for a healthy body will
never be realized.
In my mind, changing air pollution will apparently be my first choice if I can change one
important thing about my hometown. Fortunately people in my hometown are gradually aware of
the serious problem.
(Essay ID: 80 )
Topic: 6
If i could change one thing about my hometown, i would like to build up some useful and
advanced facilities for their use. A modern library, an advanced broad band system and an

fast. The city is expiriencing not only a higher birthrate than ever, but also waves of immigration.
The streets in the city are crowed or even jamed during the rush hours. If I could change one thing
about my hometown, I would develope an advanced public traffic system.
In order to hold such an exploding population, the city has extended miles by miles without much
plan. It is common for people to travel from the southmost part to the northmost part of the city to
go to work everyday. They have to spend three hours or more on the way they go to work and
come home. Eight hours' work is a heavy burden, while people have to spend hours before and
after the work. A subway running through or around the city can solve the problem. People could
live further away from the downtown without worrying about spending too much time on the way.
Some people buy their own car or take a taxi to work everyday. It's really expensive for most of
the people in the city. They can't afford paying so much on traffic fares. Many civil engineering
experts advocate that sharing a public traffic system is the most efficient way. People could
reduce their fares a lot by using the public traffic system, and they can spend the money on some
other things.
Even there are more and more people who can afford buying a car or taking taxi everyday, It is
still suggested to using the public traffic system. Because the road developement can never keep
up with the demand of the increasing cars, the cars may jam on the roads during rush hours.
Usually, the speed of the car in that time is no higher than a bycicle! And pollution is another
concern. So many private cars running in the city will bring us an environmental problem. On the
other hand, the pollution from the public traffic system is much lighter.
All in all, an advanced public traffic system time efficient, cost efficient, and pollution preventing.
This is the trend of advanced cities.
(Essay ID: 256. This is a 5 point essay)
Topic: 6
I am from Arroz e Feijao, a small town in the northeast of Brazil. Building a factory in there will
bring a lot of advantages and disadvantages, but I believe that Arroz e Feijao will mostly benefit
from the building of a new factory because it is largely populated by poor people and the factory
would bring many benefits to this small town. However, of course, a factory has disadvantages as
well.
As you know, factories usually bring pollution. If this factory is not managed very effectively and