____9. As Christmas grows near, I find myself looking back
into my childhood days at fun-filled times of snowball fights. To
think about this makes me happy.
____10. Making up his mind quickly. Jim ordered two dozen
red roses for his wife. Hoping she would accept his apology.
____11. They were all having a good time. Until one of Joe's
oldest and best friends had a little too much to drink.
____12. Although it only attained a speed of about twelve
miles an hour. My old rowboat with its three-horsepower motor
seemed like a high-speed job to me.
____13. With my brother standing by my side, I reached for
the pot handle. Tilting the pot way too much caused the boiling water
to spill.
____14. The small, one-story houses are all the same size and
style. With no difference except the color.
____15. Being a friend of mine like he was when we first
joined the soccer team. Together we learned a lot.

Exercise 2. These paragraphs need proofreading for possible fragments.
Revise them.

1. How can a person find patriotism in a local night club?
Well, it did not take me too long. About four weeks ago in a little
night club in Louisville, Kentucky, a couple of my friends, Rick and
Lon, the duo who were providing the entertainment that night for the
club.
2. For the past twenty years, the Survey Research Center at the
University of Michigan has been measuring the level of Americans'
trust and confidence in their politicians and quasi-political trust and
confidence in their political institutions and their leaders. "Political"
being all levels of government, and "quasi-political" churches, labor

especially as we two were almost alone in the world we lived with
our old grandmother in a little house, almost a shack, in the country
whenever I think of him now I see a solemn, responsible boy a boy
too old for his years who looked out for me no matter what once
there was a bully John Anson who looked enormous to me though he
was probably an average twelve-year-old John had it in for me
because he liked Littice Grant who liked me he decided to beat me
up right before her eyes I was lucky my brother came by he didn't
interfere any he just stood there somehow though his presence gave
me confidence I licked the stuffing out of John Anson if my brother
hadn't been there I don't think I could have done it. Section 3. Writing Practice. Composition Technique

Character’s Setting . A character’s setting helps the reader (and
author) get to know the setting. The author must know the world in

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which her character lives in order to know intimate details about her.
Here are some exercises that will help set your character in her
setting.

First, start your character in his/her bedroom, in front of the
closet. Write for ten, fifteen minutes about the clothes hanging in the
closet, the shoes, the belts. Is it neat, color coordinated or arranged
haphazardly? Does your character have to dig for accessories or is
everything put together? Or perhaps your character has no concern
toward accessorizing. Describe your character getting dressed and
moving around in the room. The furniture, the décor, knickknacks,

perceptible. . . . Such as these are no mean food. . . . Their sweetness

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is like the sweetness of bread, and to have discovered this
palatableness in this neglected nut, the whole world is to me sweeter
for it. . . . I should be at least equally pleased if I were to find that the
grass tasted sweet and nutritious. It increases the number of my
friends; it diminishes the number of my foes.

Assignments.

Now take yourself to an autumn day, past or
present. Are there special chores that mark the season? Is it spent with
different people? What sensory details can you remember? Use all senses.
What are you doing? Where are you? What is the mood, atmosphere?
Freewrite this scene for fifteen minutes. As always, don't stop to edit, don't
worry about whether it makes sense. Use all your senses. Use strong verbs
and nouns. Go deep. Let go.

Exercise 2. Think of a situation to illustrate the following proverbs:

1. Too many cooks spoil the broth.
2. Don’t cry out before you are hurt.
3. The course of true love never did run smooth.
4. Confession is good for the soul.

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exchange, to force, to replace, to trace, to envy, to justify, to pity, to
vary.

Exercise 2. Fill in the blanks with the words given below. Translate the
sentences.
(adorable, indistinguishable, incurable, reasonable, audible,
disagreeable, imaginable, disreputable, imperceptible,
inconceivable, incapable, admissible, indispensable, available,
responsible, invaluable, reliable, suitable, irrevocable, valuable,
unmistakable)

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